I feel the wind rush through my hair
as I run through the forest
bow in hand.
My bare feet hit the hard ground
as I raced after the animal
needed for tomorrows feast.
He stops running and turns around.
I aim and let go,
and watch my arrow soar.
I snap awake and see my book
Lying beside me.
I pick it up and begin my hunt
once again
Hi, being a Scientist poetry is not a strong point, but i did love reading your poem and the imagery was brilliant. I could see the pictures of the hunter and the environment, i liked the twist at the end as you returned to the hunt.
brilliant. why did you choose to write this? was it a school task or free choice? have you had any work published? would you like to?
To keep your work in some sort of published form you could try.
http://www.myebook.com/ very simple to use and very effective.
enjoy spring break and look forward to reading more soon.
Ian
Hi Ian. I just wanted to say thanks for expressing interest in my work it means so much! As for my poem, it was a contest I entered last year. once again, thank you.